Color Blind Page 139

Your use of the colors, movement, proportions and frames are excelent! I like it very much!

Maybe the only problem I have is the text. Personally I'd leave the spaces in blank, and add the text digitally later. Also, this have the future options to translate the comic in other languages <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Also, makes the work looks childish, unfinished.

I like the details you use in each frame. But study other types of frames, is bored when you see just rectangles and squares in a comic strip. Evaluate some professional mangas or comics, you'll see some frames have no border and that makes it dinamics and interesting.

I'd modify the ballon dialogues, they look big, or, I really don't know what word to use, they look weird. And personally are uncomfortable to read.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> The story seems very interesting, when I'll have time I'll read it!