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—Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!)
Comparison Page I cut out Aksel grabbing Potato, I know that a lot of people liked the goof, but it wasn’t in character for Aksel- he wouldn’t just shake a kid like that! But he’s still upset about her mistreatment of his amulet.
Poor Potato XD I love how you gave them the classic "shooting tears out of fear" face. And to think that Askel is being much more toned down now XD Striking fear into smol children.
....okay I'm going to say it...
Potato... it wasn't a very good pick-up line to introduce your new troll dad like that.